Heh, simplistic but efficient, for your 2nd flash film, pretty good. Keep up the good work. The only thing I would improve upon would be the timing, its a bit slow, so it makes the jokes a bit predictable, but still pretty good.
Heh, simplistic but efficient, for your 2nd flash film, pretty good. Keep up the good work. The only thing I would improve upon would be the timing, its a bit slow, so it makes the jokes a bit predictable, but still pretty good.
Age 30
Joined on 7/26/13